Term 3 Week 4

We have been learning how to make our writing more interesting by writing complex sentences. These are two ideas that are connected by a conjunction like a super glue gluing two ideas together. We watched a video on a motorbike rider surfing a wave and then wrote sentences using conjunctions about it.

I was zooming past heaps of people not surprised that they were all staring at me. Mere

I felt the freezing cold water splashing on me as if I was doing the ice bucket challenge. De-Lyna

If only I knew the waves were coming towards me while I was gliding on the glistening water. Ashley

As the people drowned in the water the only one who had survived was the fairest of them all and it's the best motorbiking man. Justine & Marie

This dude is crazy but also very brave because of the way he rides over that glistening water. Ashlin

My heart was pounding when the waves almost crashed into me but I managed to survive. Maria

The waves were scary and one trapped me in so I stepped on the gas and slid out like a boss. Riley C

Today was the day, I had never seen someone riding across the sparkling sea but I was so scared because it was going so fast. Apache