Term 3 Week 6

 We have been learning to make our writing more interesting by showing instead of telling. We tried a lemon and then had to write about how it felt.
Lemon Writing

It felt like a storm was raging in my throat. Never again, my mouth was yelling at my brain to stop. I wanted the suffering to stop. It was horrible, I could hear the laughter of me and my classmates. CALEB

 Slurp as I squeezed the lemon juice into my mouth. Yuck how sour! It tasted like 1 thousand flavours of sour skittles put in my mouth at once. The after taste stayed as long as a lake in summer. JAMES

After I tasted the lemon my tummy felt strange like tingles and tickles. When I was going to eat the lemon I was totally excited until I took the first bite and it felt like magic in my mouth, the acid was taking over! When I swallowed it was like a lightning storm in my throat. I saw my class mates’ faces going red and their eyes watering like a small waterfall dripping down. ASHLEY

Eee! My face was going crazy. I saw Cooper and James’s face turn like a red round tomato. I raised the yellow, round sour lemon. I felt like I swallowed 100 bees stinging my whole mouth and throat too. JUSTINE

 No, no, no as I screamed. The children yelled “Eat it! Eat it!” Lemon spaceship are you ready, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. “GULP!” It’s burning my insides into outsides. I scrunched up face and stepped twice Boom! Boom! Its stung as it splashed into my stomach. COOPER 

After it felt like frogs in my stomach. As it slithered down my throat I felt lightning striking me. I heard a crunch when Riley took a bite in his. JOSH